I am a Year 6 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss McLeod. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Sounds like an ogre I would want to meet! What game is his favourite and how do you beat him? Keep up the great learning! I can see that sometimes you have put in the correct full stops and capital letters but maybe not all the time! Reread it and make sure it is all looking 100% correct!
Hi Toi, I like your story. I won't like it if someone ate my food either. Maybe next time you could use capital letters and full stops in your blurb.
ReplyDeleteSounds like an ogre I would want to meet! What game is his favourite and how do you beat him? Keep up the great learning! I can see that sometimes you have put in the correct full stops and capital letters but maybe not all the time! Reread it and make sure it is all looking 100% correct!
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