I am a Year 6 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss McLeod. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi toi good job on making this bird food thing.Can you tell me what was challenging when you did this after during school.Next time you should make a quality blog post instead of 2 sentences.I wondered if you put it outside and let the birds eat it.Bye
Hello Toi nice work getting this on your blog! one thing you could do is make your blurb bigger so it is a quality blog post.
ReplyDeleteHi toi good job on making this bird food thing.Can you tell me what was challenging when you did this after during school.Next time you should make a quality blog post instead of 2 sentences.I wondered if you put it outside and let the birds eat it.Bye
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